11-17-2013, 11:42 AM
Thanks a ton for the feedback dude
I'm hard at work revising it. I think that I'm going to write it in a few different ways and see which way is satisfying. I'm about a stanza or two into the Horrible and vivid version.
I'm hard at work revising it. I think that I'm going to write it in a few different ways and see which way is satisfying. I'm about a stanza or two into the Horrible and vivid version.

