Marsh Prayer - Third Edit

Marsh Prayer - Third Edit

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11-17-2013, 12:53 AM

Thanks for taking time to read this. I appreciate your comments and have already been mulling over the changes I am going to make. I will change the second stanza and leave out the "outside the body" part. I agree that that is a bit off-putting. Thanks!

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Marsh Prayer - Third Edit - by beaufort - 11-16-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by cidermaid - 11-16-2013, 07:25 PM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by beaufort - 11-17-2013, 12:53 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by Mungo man - 11-17-2013, 08:27 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by beaufort - 11-17-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by tomoffing - 11-17-2013, 09:58 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by beaufort - 11-17-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by milo - 11-18-2013, 01:20 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by York E - 11-18-2013, 01:47 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by beaufort - 11-18-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by milo - 11-18-2013, 02:53 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by trophos - 11-26-2013, 06:25 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - by beaufort - 11-26-2013, 07:02 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - Third Edit - by beaufort - 03-09-2014, 03:07 AM

RE: Marsh Prayer - Third Edit - by jeremyyoung - 03-09-2014, 04:02 AM

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