Molded by me

[justcloudy]

Thank you Todd, always appreciate your comments. Glad that I finally delivered the smells. ;p I wanted to write "slowly stale-ing air" but it looks so ugly even though it sounds so nice that I thought "stalling" was an okay if meager substitute... I'll think on it.

Thanks as well Chris for the thoughts. Yes about "colored", I'll change that. Gotta disagree about "when" vs "at" though, sorry. A lot of people haven't liked the "guise" so I may cut it, but I was trying to show that what I'm hoarding isn't what others outside my brain would think is in there. If that makes sense. Honestly I chose fly because her fingers really do fly all over more than they glide. I was intending pound to be discordant because a lot of the time the jazzy pieces I love are unsettling, and include notes that don't feel like they fit the song or the instrument or the classiness of the situation. So I guess I got what I wanted, hehe.

-justcloudy