The ballad of dancing Willy rabbit heart (true-enigma edit)

[ChristopherSea]

Hey Chris,
Your edit works really well for me i posted the edit up top. I changed a few lines to sure up what you proposed. Let me know what you think. Also, In this line everyone knows you're crazy-except you Do you think a dash would work.
Thanks for your help,
Chazz

By the way I've really enjoyed the new poems you've been posting.

It looks good Chaz. As for the dash, it depends on what you want to achieve with it. If you are creating pause make it:

'knows you're crazy - except you'.

However, if you are doing just the opposite and blending them, I might make it:

'knows you're crazy-cept you' (as the language fits)

or they way you have it, 'crazy-except you', if you are trying to blur it and not create pause.