Molded by me

Molded by me

justcloudy Offline

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#11

11-14-2013, 06:18 PM

Hi lucent, sorry, I replied to Stephanie 2 minutes after you posted and then didn't see yours until now.

Thanks for the comments, especially about the second strophe, I hadn't caught that tense issue, and see how it is a bit awkward. I'll work on it. =]

-justcloudy

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Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-11-2013, 08:33 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Todd - 11-11-2013, 11:57 PM

RE: Molded by me - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 01:35 AM

RE: Molded by me - by heslopian - 11-12-2013, 02:14 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-13-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-13-2013, 09:31 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Stephanie - 11-13-2013, 10:43 PM

RE: Molded by me - by lucentwavering - 11-14-2013, 05:30 AM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-14-2013, 05:32 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Stephanie - 11-14-2013, 05:27 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-14-2013, 06:18 PM

RE: Molded by me - by Todd - 11-14-2013, 09:40 PM

RE: Molded by me - by ChristopherSea - 11-14-2013, 09:53 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-16-2013, 04:34 AM

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