11-14-2013, 05:32 AM
Thank you Stephanie. ^___^
That line actually was "floating rainbow-prisons" in the original version. I changed it so that all three strophes would end in "air." But I'm not sure if the change was worth it, as you pointed out.
-justcloudy
That line actually was "floating rainbow-prisons" in the original version. I changed it so that all three strophes would end in "air." But I'm not sure if the change was worth it, as you pointed out.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.