11-14-2013, 02:12 AM
(11-14-2013, 01:59 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: If you knew Susie… This is an interesting take on the old song Tom. It has a similar theme at first, but we quickly realize the rumors are reality and you take it one step further with the bisexuality. However, in my mind you need to literally clean up the plot, as making love to a girl after she pees herself and then in the same bed that she just vomited on is a bit too much to stomach! But then, I don’t know Suzie…Hell chris, it's all good clean fun! Yes, I just stopped myself calling it If you knew Susie....do cliches have a shelf-life?
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