11-13-2013, 06:50 PM
Thank you both. It's very much appreciated.
I tried on "street light" and you're right. It sounds/reads so much better,
Giving an image of light in a more succinct way. Changed "how" to "When"
and ended the previous with a full stop. Still unsure if I've done the right thing?
but maybe I'm thinking about it too much. Thanks again!
I tried on "street light" and you're right. It sounds/reads so much better,
Giving an image of light in a more succinct way. Changed "how" to "When"
and ended the previous with a full stop. Still unsure if I've done the right thing?
but maybe I'm thinking about it too much. Thanks again!