The ghazal who ate the inkwell
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When I considering mastering a form I feel like that diver on an Olympic springboard who has just watched the competitor do a forward 2 1/2 somersault 3 twist pike, and says to themselves: screw it CANNONBALL!

beautiful work Leanne.

I loved the trunkless legs line especially. All of it was really good though (from my Cannonball perspective).
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by Leanne - 11-13-2013, 04:34 AM
RE: The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by Leanne - 11-13-2013, 03:52 PM
RE: The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by billy - 11-13-2013, 04:57 PM
RE: The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by Leanne - 11-13-2013, 05:35 PM
RE: The ghazal who ate the inkwell - by billy - 11-13-2013, 06:06 PM



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