11-13-2013, 06:12 AM
(11-12-2013, 12:53 PM)aaa1993 Wrote: Jae,Thanks to all for the replies.
Slowly slowly catchy monkey,
the monkey catches, the house burns down -- replace catches
Quietly, quietly, listen closely,
to strained confessions of egotistic clowns -- boastful instead of egotistic
Quickly, quickly, I hear them coming,
the clumsy beat of feet on ground -- love this even if its a bit of a cliche
So wakie wakie you sleepy nation,
this rabid dog will hunt you down
And from your wounds will grow no roses,
just death's stale stench there will be found. -- nice alliteration
aaa1993: boastful clowns is a great swap as on this line I was thinking of a media group.
Thanks for the input.

