To a Nation
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(11-12-2013, 12:53 PM)aaa1993 Wrote:  Jae,


Slowly slowly catchy monkey,
the monkey catches, the house burns down -- replace catches

Quietly, quietly, listen closely,
to strained confessions of egotistic clowns -- boastful instead of egotistic

Quickly, quickly, I hear them coming,
the clumsy beat of feet on ground -- love this even if its a bit of a cliche

So wakie wakie you sleepy nation,
this rabid dog will hunt you down

And from your wounds will grow no roses,
just death's stale stench there will be found. -- nice alliteration
Thanks to all for the replies.
aaa1993: boastful clowns is a great swap as on this line I was thinking of a media group.
Thanks for the input.
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Messages In This Thread
To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-10-2013, 03:40 AM
RE: To a Nation - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 04:02 AM
RE: To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-10-2013, 04:26 AM
RE: To a Nation - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: To a Nation - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 04:28 AM
RE: To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-10-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: To a Nation - by ellajam - 11-10-2013, 06:45 AM
RE: To a Nation - by Graystar - 11-10-2013, 07:33 PM
RE: To a Nation - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 12:53 PM
RE: To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-13-2013, 06:12 AM



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