If I want gentle criticism, I'll go to my creative obelisk weaving class

[milo]

I missed this the first time around, milo. It really is hilarious. I agree with Jack that it could be reposted into the critique forums.

Much enjoyed,

Todd

Thanks Todd (and jack). It is in fun as I have no intention of revising it (you'd think I would at least fix the meter, right) but if I change my mind, I will move it over and give it a shot.