11-12-2013, 03:31 PM
Dawn breaks,
My body shakes,
I miss your burning touch,
Come back to me,
And set me free,
No longer can I exist without my one and only crutch. - Too long, a bit of a rambling
Gone now,
Can't remember how,
We started down this lonely path.
Hand in hand,
We walk this land,
In the shadows with a hollow laugh.
Leave home,
I'm all alone,
I struggle to face the day,
No one knows,
How my carousel goes,
But it only goes one way. -Awesome, good imagery
Back again,
Find my friend,
You've hidden all day long, - add a rhythm
Now I'm here,
You hide my fear,
And from my reach you cast it far beyond.
Body cold,
Have my soul,
Take me to a happy place,
Head starts drumming,
Your touch is numbing,
Please fill this empty space.
Body warm,
A violent storm, - am I missing something ? What do you means in this line?
Quickly tomorrow come again,
I'm all your's, you're all mine,
I'll waste my time.
Rinse. Repeat. Until my end. - Lovely ending
My body shakes,
I miss your burning touch,
Come back to me,
And set me free,
No longer can I exist without my one and only crutch. - Too long, a bit of a rambling
Gone now,
Can't remember how,
We started down this lonely path.
Hand in hand,
We walk this land,
In the shadows with a hollow laugh.
Leave home,
I'm all alone,
I struggle to face the day,
No one knows,
How my carousel goes,
But it only goes one way. -Awesome, good imagery
Back again,
Find my friend,
You've hidden all day long, - add a rhythm
Now I'm here,
You hide my fear,
And from my reach you cast it far beyond.
Body cold,
Have my soul,
Take me to a happy place,
Head starts drumming,
Your touch is numbing,
Please fill this empty space.
Body warm,
A violent storm, - am I missing something ? What do you means in this line?
Quickly tomorrow come again,
I'm all your's, you're all mine,
I'll waste my time.
Rinse. Repeat. Until my end. - Lovely ending