11-12-2013, 03:21 PM
I speak to my self - myself
knowing that the zombies
are just like everybody else - how so ?
I sit quietly observing - Why?
the people surrounding me
not knowing - what ?
sickened by evil
who am i to turn to
i hate the deceitful
realizing that i am my own pupil - How is this connected with the first 2 stanzas ?
I found my savior
and in returned showed me to his people
for I was never truly alone
I had God
Goodbye evil
Should probably add some rhythm to it, it doesn't really flow when reading your poem...
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knowing that the zombies
are just like everybody else - how so ?
I sit quietly observing - Why?
the people surrounding me
not knowing - what ?
sickened by evil
who am i to turn to
i hate the deceitful
realizing that i am my own pupil - How is this connected with the first 2 stanzas ?
I found my savior
and in returned showed me to his people
for I was never truly alone
I had God
Goodbye evil
Should probably add some rhythm to it, it doesn't really flow when reading your poem...
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