Molded by me

Molded by me

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11-12-2013, 01:35 AM

I like your piece. The middle lines in the second stanza seem to me to be the only weaker part - would also like the last stanza to tie in a bit more to the first. Overall I think it is lovely, reads well, and has great potential. Thanks for sharing it.

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Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-11-2013, 08:33 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Todd - 11-11-2013, 11:57 PM

RE: Molded by me - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 01:35 AM

RE: Molded by me - by heslopian - 11-12-2013, 02:14 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-13-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-13-2013, 09:31 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Stephanie - 11-13-2013, 10:43 PM

RE: Molded by me - by lucentwavering - 11-14-2013, 05:30 AM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-14-2013, 05:32 AM

RE: Molded by me - by Stephanie - 11-14-2013, 05:27 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-14-2013, 06:18 PM

RE: Molded by me - by Todd - 11-14-2013, 09:40 PM

RE: Molded by me - by ChristopherSea - 11-14-2013, 09:53 PM

RE: Molded by me - by justcloudy - 11-16-2013, 04:34 AM

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