11-11-2013, 10:45 PM
(11-11-2013, 10:26 PM)Stephanie Wrote: No I forgot to put the title in from the last one. There are no more feathers in it now weirdly, it's changed so much! Thank you so much for all your input, it's been brilliant.You're most welcome.
If that is the case about the title, I would respectfully suggest that you revert to your title and opening from the last revision. I think it's stronger, but that's just an opinion of course.
Best,
Todd
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