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Alone, yet Surrounded
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11-11-2013, 04:09 AM
It seems like this poem has a few near-rhymes in it. I assume that is on purpose. My own humble advice would be to either rhyme consistently or not at all, and if you do rhyme don't use so many near-rhymes. IDK what the technical term for them is, and I'm just starting out with poetry but they sound out of place to me.
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Alone, yet Surrounded - by bpwill23 - 07-19-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 08:32 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-18-2013, 05:44 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by tigrflye - 10-18-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by SirBrendan - 10-19-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by drithebee - 10-30-2013, 07:33 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Blunt - 11-01-2013, 12:47 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Stephanie - 11-02-2013, 08:40 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by rowens - 11-03-2013, 06:47 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by alatos - 11-11-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:21 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 08:52 PM
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