My Morning - Second Edit

[beaufort]

Thanks for your input, I appreciate it. What I am trying to state in the last line is that the narrator has no control over the day. Initially I had thought of someone who was dying, but woke up to another day, and I was going for starkness and pragmatism. I know that is not clear on paper. I will work on this and do a major revision. Thanks for spending so much time with it.