In the west she'd be locked away, edited
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Thanks for your comments beaufort, and I'm humbled and glad you enjoyed it.

I'm interested that you find that line off-putting... is it the contrast between west-and-not that's unsettling? Or do you think it's more to do with the line break?

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RE: In the west she'd be locked away, edited - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 06:25 AM



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