To a Nation

To a Nation

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11-10-2013, 04:37 AM

(11-10-2013, 04:28 AM)justcloudy Wrote: Jae,

Now that you explain the monkey catching line I like it. But only after the explanation.

-justcloudy

Yeah I totally get that, but I don't know how to change it without losing the cheeky image I got in my head.

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To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-10-2013, 03:40 AM

RE: To a Nation - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 04:02 AM

RE: To a Nation - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: To a Nation - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 04:28 AM

RE: To a Nation - by Jae Mc Donnell - 11-10-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: To a Nation - by ellajam - 11-10-2013, 06:45 AM

RE: To a Nation - by Graystar - 11-10-2013, 07:33 PM

RE: To a Nation - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 12:53 PM

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