Puzzled piece, edit 3
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I think the edit fixed every issue I had. It's a smooth good read. It has a Neil Gaiman Crazy Hair feel to it.

Enjoyed it.

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Puzzled piece, edit 3 - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 09:05 AM
RE: Puzzled piece - by SirBrendan - 11-07-2013, 08:40 PM
RE: Puzzled piece - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Puzzled piece - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 10:51 PM
RE: Puzzled piece - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by justcloudy - 11-08-2013, 08:36 PM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by ellajam - 11-08-2013, 08:53 PM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 09:22 PM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by justcloudy - 11-08-2013, 09:30 PM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by ChristopherSea - 11-09-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by rowens - 11-09-2013, 01:42 AM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 2 - by justcloudy - 11-09-2013, 06:13 AM
RE: Puzzled piece, edit 3 - by justcloudy - 11-24-2013, 09:35 AM



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