Kindly, Go Away

[ellajam]

Kindly, Go Away (First Edit)

I know, of course, it, Love, can not be lost.
It can however
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond
and that absence is felt.
I know, of course, the gut rot pain will pass
but so did he.
He, like an asteroid that breezed so beautifully past
only to be compelled into a crater-- done
I know, of course, by you.
Death
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond;
you will never be felt

Kindly, Go Away

I know, of course, it, love, can not be lost.
It can however
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond
and that absence is felt.
I know, of course, the gut rot pain will pass
but so did he.
He, like an asteroid that breezed so beautifully past
only to be compelled into a crater-- done
I know, of course, by you, the cosmic joke no one finds funny.
Death
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond;
you will never be felt

Hi, Brendan,

I don't feel ready to comment on the whole piece, only 2 reads, but I already miss "the cosmic joke no one finds funny.", it gave me a sad smile.

The asteroid line is fabulous, I'll be back when I can come up with some suggestions for you.