11-07-2013, 08:57 PM
Yhea, this is my first go at 'free verse'. It seems I took the 'I don't need a strict structure' a wee bit too far. I chopped off a bit in the edit that wasn't necessary. Added some punctuation changes to try and fix it as well. Hope that makes it better.
If I could say only one thing before I die, it'd probably be,
"Please don't kill me"
"Please don't kill me"