11-07-2013, 06:26 AM
I like this Viktor. It's a bit disturbing, which it good, and a bit surprising too. Found myself sitting up and paying attention from the first line.
I agree with ChristopherSea's comments, and echo the one about the last 2 lines. Give us something to see at the end, not something to nod to.
Looking forward to reading more from you.
-justcloudy
I agree with ChristopherSea's comments, and echo the one about the last 2 lines. Give us something to see at the end, not something to nod to.
Looking forward to reading more from you.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.