This is not my Landscape

[ChristopherSea]

The repeats of landscape and lead pipe struck a poignant cord with me! Will this poem will get criticized for lack of proper punctuation, over-modification of nouns (and everything else), to much abstraction, nonsense speak and probably some other major offences? YES, but I loved it. Why? Well, your piece is a grand combination of metapoetry, metaphor and rant! This is not my beautiful landscape, nor is it one that can ever be repainted unfortunately. This is a wonderful emotive spoken word piece on the destruction of our planet. Mother Gaia has goose-bumps! Nonetheless, some poetic critics are having seizures and you know that you could give this vehicle a tune-up.