Beaten Path

[ThePinsir]

very nice rhyme scheme and structure! thanks for the read.

Dawn breaks,
My body shakes,
I miss your burning touch,
Come back to me,
And set me free,
No longer can I exist without my one and only crutch. kinda wordy. maybe just "my only crutch" or even "my crutch"

Gone now,
Can't remember how,
We started down this lonely path.
Hand in hand,
We walk this land,
In the shadows with a hollow laugh.

Leave home,
I'm all alone,
I struggle to face the day,
No one knows,
How my carousel goes,
But it only goes one way. amazing

Back again,
Find my friend,
You've hidden all day long,
Now I'm here,
You hide my fear,
And from my reach you cast it far beyond.

Body cold,
Have my soul,
Take me to a happy place,
Head starts drumming,
Your touch is numbing,
Please fill this empty space.

Body warm,
A violent storm, I wonder what this means...
Quickly tomorrow come again,
I'm all your's, you're all mine,
I'll waste my time.
Rinse. Repeat. Until my end. I loved this ending!