Beaten Path

Beaten Path

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11-05-2013, 01:52 AM

The structure of this poem is top notch. I like that the first line of each stanza is kept two words. The rhyme scheme is nice because it is straight forward but not dull. I enjoy how he last two stanzas oppose each other. And the last line of the poem holds power in it.

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Beaten Path - by CoffeeSpoons - 11-07-2012, 10:14 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Rose Love - 11-11-2012, 05:13 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by cidermaid - 11-18-2012, 11:22 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by drithebee - 11-05-2013, 01:52 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by ThePinsir - 11-05-2013, 02:17 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Two_muffins - 11-05-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Graystar - 11-05-2013, 04:49 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:31 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by lachaser33 - 11-16-2013, 02:30 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by tomoffing - 11-17-2013, 09:35 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by M. Warrens - 12-09-2013, 11:31 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by dialectical - 12-13-2013, 09:15 AM

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