grey puddle (haiku)

grey puddle (haiku)

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11-04-2013, 01:36 PM

(10-28-2013, 02:15 PM)emerald13 Wrote: grey puddle
ticking quietly
a wing torn moth

©Gina

i think ticking places it near the realms of senryu. but i do like the depth the poem gives me.

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grey puddle (haiku) - by emerald13 - 10-28-2013, 02:15 PM

RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by Keaner222 - 11-04-2013, 12:56 PM

RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by billy - 11-04-2013, 01:36 PM

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