11-04-2013, 10:49 AM
and if one dies 
okay i'm yanking chains.
for me it reads as more senryu because of the second line.
the fighting being the moment in time.
what is a a female dove called?
a suggestion would be
the hen awaits winner or something like
the best line is the last as it's an image of the fight and of the sex afterwards
okay i'm yanking chains.for me it reads as more senryu because of the second line.
the fighting being the moment in time.
what is a a female dove called?
a suggestion would be
the hen awaits winner or something like
the best line is the last as it's an image of the fight and of the sex afterwards