Alone, yet Surrounded

Alone, yet Surrounded

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10-30-2013, 07:33 PM

The use of the term zombies in the first stanza, while it does create a vivid image, takes away from the meaning of the poem. In this context you may want to use a different word as not to distract from the rest of the poem.

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Alone, yet Surrounded - by bpwill23 - 07-19-2013, 01:15 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 08:32 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-18-2013, 05:44 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by tigrflye - 10-18-2013, 08:24 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by SirBrendan - 10-19-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:57 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by drithebee - 10-30-2013, 07:33 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Blunt - 11-01-2013, 12:47 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Stephanie - 11-02-2013, 08:40 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by rowens - 11-03-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 03:53 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by alatos - 11-11-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 08:52 PM

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