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10-28-2013, 07:04 PM

This is lovely! As written, you could simply drop the 'as night' and curl the title twilight right into the poem:

twilight
curves into a warm
sunken sky...

Nice!/Chris

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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twilight - by emerald13 - 10-28-2013, 02:29 PM

RE: twilight - by ChristopherSea - 10-28-2013, 07:04 PM

RE: twilight - by beaufort - 11-09-2013, 03:14 AM

RE: twilight - by paul.rosen - 11-09-2013, 03:13 PM

RE: twilight - by trailertrash - 12-09-2013, 08:34 AM

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