Ship of Fools

[ChristopherSea]

Dope christened vessel
navigates deeply in vein
on sham adventures

for me christened takes something away.
doped vessel would be a suggestion.
i'd also suggest removing [deeply]
i enjoyed the wordplay :J:

Maybe, Billy and Gina. I like both the title and 'christened' in their development of metaphor using a cruiseship's virgin voyage for someone shooting heroine for the first time. However, these lines are also part a greater poem in development, so I will definitely look at them again.