10-27-2013, 09:24 PM
(10-27-2013, 08:03 AM)emerald13 Wrote: you could take it even further ?ha, nice. It's a tanka, so I'd have to drop that semicolon. And that last line was just a comment on not being happy with my punctuation of this one.
language broken
, : ; .
defined ambiguity
lost interpretation hemmed
in
just funning with your piece ..taking it to even more abstract. ....i found it fun to think on.
wondering what 'i still can't get it right' means .... >>> Gina
language broken by
, : .
adds definition:
ambiguity dispelled,
interpretation hemmed in.
ha, still unsure.
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