Cataton

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I like where this one is going, but I need help with order and content. Here is another one of my song ideas. Its supposed to be slow and a little haunting. Hope you like it.

CATATONMeaning?

There's nothing left to fight with,
This stupor is my grave,
The cold and paralyzing grip,
My catalectic trance, Catalectic?
It feels so never ending,

My decision to break
my constriction,
My decision to die
is my condition,

I feel the empty,
I feel its hands on me,
I have to hold on,
Before I slip away

The shuffle of dismay
All the messes that I make
In my catatonic world
where I feel so fake

I'm losing focus
I don't know how to move
Watch it all leave me
I'm ready to lose

My desicion to make, Spelling/typos. Correct basic errors before posting. See forum rules.
my conviction
My addiction to hate
is my religion

I feel the empty,
I feel its fingers inside,
I have to hold on,
Before I let it all die

And when I give in
the stupor calls my name
My fingers hard like candy
My rigid face of wax
this body is lifeless
But unable to decay

My restriction to break
my constriction
My decision to die
is my condition

Moved to mild pending content/structural modifications. This piece has basic errors.
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