Lunar Glow

[allykat727]

I like the feelings created
It moves me
as the moon moves the ocean

Start the third stanza with something other than and and only capitalize things for a reason ie importance, personification, topical significance etc
I feel left a little hanging at the end
Maybe I just need something big
Try telling us something else that beauty does perhaps blending some descriptors and freedom from the original with the mood of the first

<3

Thanks Tempest! I appreciate the feedback.