"The right way"

[Euan]

I am not disregarding what the crits r saying at all, I'm not sayin I am better good or even novice, I'm not even saying I'm happy, I'm simply lost in life and these words n potry n music the take me away from reality. So with respect I'm saying that what drives me to do this is not the perfection but more of a reflection on my lack of acceptance to the way things r I'm still young naive and findinf myself. I'm not trying to insult anyones passion for this beautiful thing we as creatires created many years ago so, or convince anyone that the right way is the wrong way, I'm simply expressing myself in this dark time of mine. The crits are absolutely right if this was poetry school I would be miserably failing but its not poetry school, maybe I'm posting in the wrong area or something but I'm here to post and read and interact with emotions of people of never been much of a literate but I do enjoy seeing expression and expression myself. This whatever it maybe called is again just that.I'm not trying to make enemies or down talk anybody on there work or rebel against anyone who discredits my work. I'm just trying to surrond myself with passionate people and in turn show I am as well passionate, although not correctly.

This is called life, which you should experience rather than attempt to avoid. And justifying yourself based on this alone? I'm not convinced, I may come off insensitive, but I'd rather not have you I inflict your personal shit upon this site. Get back to business. Write something better than this.