"The right way"

[tectak]

The right way
To:TecTak


In a world of dreams and consciousness, phenomenons and emotion
Odd to me, disaknowledge these, n make way for legitmacy and reason
Only to be tossed in systematic society of sharks and minnows in this ocean.

Resumes and degrees declare level of intelligence and capabilities,
But this sensation of needing to be beautiful, not right, is all I believe in
Naive, but I continue forward in pursuance of originality blocked by formalities.

A species who's predominant trate of success, was asking questions Trate is a settlement in the Slovene Hills...but that's right, isn't it? I mean, it just doesn't matter. There is no wrong word. I give up. Go to end
Who have been deemed insane in result of their obsessions
And had any of the greats of our time been alive today,
All would look in disgust and would retract their work and say,
There is no "right way"

It is quite journey through this jumble only to arrive at such a weak and overworked conclusion...which I might add does a great disservice to all the posters on this and other sites who strive to improve. You are, with this, in danger of appealing to the lowest common denominators. I think you should know something about poetry, art, music, literature and life as we know it...if there is no right way then ipso facto there is no wrong way. The greatest joy in any endeavour is the pursuit of that temptress, Perfection. Unattainable, but constantly beckoning the muse, we aspirational poets get pleasure from the glimpses we occasionally are permitted. To disavow youself of the wonderful journey is tantamount to failure...many live their lives in this condition. That's fine...your life. Much worse, though, is to convince yourself that this is how you planned it all...but still, OK, your life. There is, however, a far worse failing. It is the evangelistical pursuit of abject failure, most often undertaken with missionary zeal. I fear you are heading that way.
If so, then do not listen. Go to bed happy every night. When you want your work to be considered on merit not mundanity...please let the crits know.
Best,
tectak
Well done, good start. Legitimacy, trait, whose. You really don't care, do you?
PS I write this because I understand that the piece is a tribute to me. I am flaturd.