Dispelling Alphabet Soup

[ChristopherSea]

I really appreciate the feedback. Sincere thanks for letting me know it tries to get across but falls short. It definitely comes from an out there place. I've been writing poetry for a long time and published two books, this one did not make the cut. I wanted to put it in here to see what translated and what didn't you know. So really thank you and any more feedback is greatly appreciated. I'll be posting again, something more refined, and hoping to hear from you.

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Hello. Because I can't bear the thought of you feeling caught I'll try to explain a little. Consciousness in a breath feels, to me, a lot like consciousness in a cloud. But ultimately leads to much quicker evaporation, or some such dissolution. En just because I like to play with words, hint at things. Would've been in, but en route seemed like such a short leap. I try to mean as many things at once as possible but if it just comes out as nonsense that's no good. So thank you. Any more feedback will be highly valued. Stay Shpongled.

I get the cloud, cumulus would have sat fine, it was cumulo that I never use. En route, nah, never made that jump.

What do you think Brandon? Should I change it to Cumulus?

Yes, you should, as cumulo- is a prefix. However, cumulo-vapor is an interesting possibility.