10-25-2013, 12:31 AM
Hi, Tempest,
I got caught on Breathing cumulo vapor and didn't want to go on. I still can't figure out how or why cumulo and en are used here.
But once I got past that I enjoyed the read. I particularly liked decay like so much disregard.
If you're not Shpongle, or even if you are, you might want to credit the quote.
Just a thought.
I got caught on Breathing cumulo vapor and didn't want to go on. I still can't figure out how or why cumulo and en are used here.
But once I got past that I enjoyed the read. I particularly liked decay like so much disregard.
If you're not Shpongle, or even if you are, you might want to credit the quote.
Just a thought.
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