10-23-2013, 06:15 AM
(10-23-2013, 05:51 AM)ehabuncensored Wrote: Another amazing one, I read the critiques after n its funny because like the as or at the kids across the street n i didn't even notice it because its like I'm hearing the poem read to me, it was an excellent poem excited to see what else u got. I really can't critique because u have to be an excellent writer to blend words into an image, I'm not concerned with legibility or grammer its just another system cap on art which in unsupportable. I think ur form of writing is perfect, n ur creativity exceeds barriers of legitimacy. : )Hello the purpose of this forum is to critique. It's nice that you appreciate a poem, but to say you "really can't critique because u have to be an excellent writer to blend words into an image." doesn't work. We need you to explain why things worked for you and in the critical forum actually make an attempt at critique./admin
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson