10-23-2013, 05:51 AM
Another amazing one, I read the critiques after n its funny because like the as or at the kids across the street n i didn't even notice it because its like I'm hearing the poem read to me, it was an excellent poem excited to see what else u got. I really can't critique because u have to be an excellent writer to blend words into an image, I'm not concerned with legibility or grammer its just another system cap on art which in unsupportable. I think ur form of writing is perfect, n ur creativity exceeds barriers of legitimacy. : )