tarnish (My first poem)

tarnish (My first poem)

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10-23-2013, 12:48 AM

At first I thought it had a good meter, but then just stopped (after "he lifts the pane"). was this on purpose? Or am I seeing meter where none was intended?

My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!

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tarnish (My first poem) - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 04:15 AM

RE: tarnish - by milo - 10-21-2013, 06:41 AM

RE: tarnish - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by milo - 10-23-2013, 10:47 AM

RE: tarnish - by svartrxdrone - 10-21-2013, 07:42 AM

RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by billy - 10-23-2013, 11:05 AM

RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:48 AM

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