10-23-2013, 12:09 AM
(10-22-2013, 07:59 AM)Legoloofa Wrote: I like to imagine versions of me within a world that couldn't possibly exist.Hi, Lego, I'm sorry, but I just couldn't make any sense of this. The first 5 lines read like nonsense, which can be fun, but the switch to
Folding books into skulls
leaving eyeprints on ceilings
injecting trees into bloodstreams
carving pennies out of scotch
jumping into pockets of neon light
feeding orphans white glue
watching stones decay
holding street lights with broken finger nails
watering Gods video games.
"feeding orphans white glue
watching stones decay"
gave it a solidity I didn't understand at all.
Might just be me.
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