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The Devourer
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10-22-2013, 05:10 AM
(10-22-2013, 05:05 AM)Wjames Wrote: Just my thoughts as I read the poem. You shouldn't just let people tell you what to keep in your poems though. Take any and all advice, and only use whatever advice you genuinely agree with.Please try to avoid giving life advice in the critical forums. focus on the poem. /mod |
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The Devourer - by RyanRader13 - 10-22-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: The Devourer - by Nick - 10-22-2013, 04:53 AM
RE: The Devourer - by tectak - 10-22-2013, 04:58 AM
RE: The Devourer - by RyanRader13 - 10-22-2013, 05:58 AM
RE: The Devourer - by Wjames - 10-22-2013, 05:05 AM
RE: The Devourer - by milo - 10-22-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: The Devourer - by Wjames - 10-22-2013, 05:13 AM
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