10-21-2013, 08:07 AM
Todd,
Thank you.
Milo: Hm, is it better for me to play dumb and just ask your opinion of how I should morph my poem into a terza rima.. or openly admit that is what I was trying to do... all by myself with no one to help me (can u tell?) I thought the only rules were A-B-A, B-C-B, C-D-C, D-E-D etc. with no limit to the number of lines and end with e d-e-d-e or d-e-d e e. (i tried this one) Does the last line have to repeat? And i read iambic pentameter was prefered but no definate rhythm HAD to be used. I did purposely write it with 4 feet, 4 feet, 5 feet, 4, 4, 5.. cuz hey, i thought it sounded nice, but I can feel your disapproval. Haha. Dang it, if I'm gonna hang out here, I need to go back to college.
Thank you.
Milo: Hm, is it better for me to play dumb and just ask your opinion of how I should morph my poem into a terza rima.. or openly admit that is what I was trying to do... all by myself with no one to help me (can u tell?) I thought the only rules were A-B-A, B-C-B, C-D-C, D-E-D etc. with no limit to the number of lines and end with e d-e-d-e or d-e-d e e. (i tried this one) Does the last line have to repeat? And i read iambic pentameter was prefered but no definate rhythm HAD to be used. I did purposely write it with 4 feet, 4 feet, 5 feet, 4, 4, 5.. cuz hey, i thought it sounded nice, but I can feel your disapproval. Haha. Dang it, if I'm gonna hang out here, I need to go back to college.