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tarnish (My first poem)
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10-21-2013, 07:42 AM
I think this poem is very good for a first, given my lack of experience I couldn't tell you what was wrong but I can say that it made me strongly contemplate what you were writing about and it's always a good thing when your audience is interested enough to try to translate what you are saying.
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tarnish (My first poem) - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 04:15 AM
RE: tarnish - by milo - 10-21-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: tarnish - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by milo - 10-23-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: tarnish - by svartrxdrone - 10-21-2013, 07:42 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by billy - 10-23-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:48 AM
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