tarnish (My first poem)
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toddling, touching, the room is mine
with window shut and sunlight scattered,
less gold than bronze,
across a veil of dust

I meet Myself;
He lifts the pane,
and the motes,
they settle

sitting, staring, must We share?
I feel the chill
and see the tarnish;
compact and cramped is this cage

Forget Myself.
I cannot bear.
Shut the window.
I'll return to my dust.
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tarnish (My first poem) - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 04:15 AM
RE: tarnish - by milo - 10-21-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: tarnish - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by milo - 10-23-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: tarnish - by svartrxdrone - 10-21-2013, 07:42 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by billy - 10-23-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: tarnish (My first poem) - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:48 AM



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