10-21-2013, 04:15 AM
Any and all feedback is welcome!
toddling, touching, the room is mine
with window shut and sunlight scattered,
less gold than bronze,
across a veil of dust
I meet Myself;
He lifts the pane,
and the motes,
they settle
sitting, staring, must We share?
I feel the chill
and see the tarnish;
compact and cramped is this cage
Forget Myself.
I cannot bear.
Shut the window.
I'll return to my dust.
toddling, touching, the room is mine
with window shut and sunlight scattered,
less gold than bronze,
across a veil of dust
I meet Myself;
He lifts the pane,
and the motes,
they settle
sitting, staring, must We share?
I feel the chill
and see the tarnish;
compact and cramped is this cage
Forget Myself.
I cannot bear.
Shut the window.
I'll return to my dust.
