Uncle's home

[milo]

Yes, my uncle Jim.
The one knows
left from right,
but not a rulers rim.

Even though he most
likely built your school,
you know he is king
of cool.

I wish I could be more like him,
but in a catholic jail.
Chances, slim.

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nice
poem

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