Uncle's home
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(06-07-2013, 10:03 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Yes, my uncle Jim.
The one knows
left from right, The second and third line read bad.
but not a rulers rim. What do you mean by this?

Even though he most
likely built your school, Prove it.
you know he is king
of cool. Too school for cool, or too cool for school.

I wish I could be more like him, Does Jim write good poems?
but in a catholic jail.
Chances, slim. Not a bad ending.
Wasn't a whole lot of imagery, but at least the grammar here was more bearable.
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
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Uncle's home - by Bunx - 06-07-2013, 10:03 AM
RE: Uncle's home - by Malu - 10-19-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: Uncle's home - by Sonata - 10-22-2013, 02:19 AM



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