Day Wishing

[Todd]

Jenn, nice surprise ending. No real issues with it.

He perched upon the window seat.
His nose against the glass to peek
at children playing games across the street.

He wished he wasn't such a freak
so friends would offer him to play,--syntax feels a bit off to me, it could be just me.
convinced that he would win at hide and seek.

He pictured every sun-filled day
If Mother wasn't such a prude
and knew just what his dad would say:
to drop the sulking, wishful mood--There might be a better word than wishful
polite young vamps can't play with food.

So minor nits. Fun read.

Best.

Todd