Room at the Inn
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(10-17-2013, 08:16 AM)Gritdog Wrote:  Man! Violent! But all in all, very well done. I believe that one person said this already but I'll say again. The actions are very clear to me, as is the motive. but...... the setting? well i'm not too sure. I will definitely subscribe to this one. just a personal request because I enjoyed this one so much, but I would like to see you do some revising and editing to this to include a definite setting. or maybe its the way you intended it to be after all. other then this I could not be more impressed with this. very good piece of work! and on the side I almost felt like i was reading a description of a scene from a more mature version of elders scrolls. Keep up the good work!
-gritdog
Thanks for givin' this little ditty a read.
Now I gotta go Wiki "elders scrolls".
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Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 02:29 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 03:33 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Malu - 10-12-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Laura Marx - 10-12-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by tigrflye - 10-13-2013, 05:09 PM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-16-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Gritdog - 10-17-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-19-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Gritdog - 10-19-2013, 02:15 AM



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